Rhy'Din Adventures: Shine (OOC thread)
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- Candy Hart
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- Ellie Luisante
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- Napoleon Bonarat
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So that was the first real "boss fight" of the story. Like Problem Sleuth did, I'm letting the video game influences become more visible in more use of the "mechanics" of the "game".
Did you guys enjoy reading that update? I know I may be laying on the game influences a bit thick, so if you're not a fan, I can dial it down for future updates.
Did you guys enjoy reading that update? I know I may be laying on the game influences a bit thick, so if you're not a fan, I can dial it down for future updates.
- Ellie Luisante
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So, I'm posting here to brag about Candy Hart and Napoleon Bonarat, who sent Ellie some awesome commands while she was in chat tonight. Thanks to their combined efforts (they didn't know they were combining, but they were), I got a spark of inspiration and came up with the perfect way to end what will be the most important fight in the entire story. Just to tease you... thanks to them, I have now devised the happy ending to the Ellie vs. Serge fight that Brutus and Pixie foresaw.
Such is the vast benefit of sending our adorable heroine commands! We're writing this story together! Who knows what I may be inspired to have occur by the zany suggestions I get? Heck, we're writing the story even when we're not writing the story, thanks to the gracious volunteers who interact with Ellie in live play! In case it hasn't been clear, player-submitted commands in live play appear in italics.
Since this event is now central to the plot, I will post it up during the intermission between Act 2 (where we are now: the jailbreak) and Act 3 (what happens after Ellie is free, and after the training she is currently doing in the duels). But we can't get through Act 2 without your help!
In conclusion, thanks to everyone who has been sending Ellie commands in live chat! Please continue to do so; I'm having a lot of fun here, and I hope you all are too!
Such is the vast benefit of sending our adorable heroine commands! We're writing this story together! Who knows what I may be inspired to have occur by the zany suggestions I get? Heck, we're writing the story even when we're not writing the story, thanks to the gracious volunteers who interact with Ellie in live play! In case it hasn't been clear, player-submitted commands in live play appear in italics.
Since this event is now central to the plot, I will post it up during the intermission between Act 2 (where we are now: the jailbreak) and Act 3 (what happens after Ellie is free, and after the training she is currently doing in the duels). But we can't get through Act 2 without your help!
In conclusion, thanks to everyone who has been sending Ellie commands in live chat! Please continue to do so; I'm having a lot of fun here, and I hope you all are too!
- Candy Hart
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- Ellie Luisante
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Alright!
> Eat the cheeseburger
> Eat the fries
> Crawl under the table
> Reheat the food
> Check for ketchup in the fridge
> Remember you already ruined the ketchup
> Look in the first cabinet
> Look in the second cabinet
> Go to the computer
> Access the internet
> Check out the browsing history
> Feel embarrassed by what you see in the browsing history
> Close that window and never think on it again
> Just dance
> Get back to work!
> Eat the cheeseburger
> Eat the fries
> Crawl under the table
> Reheat the food
> Check for ketchup in the fridge
> Remember you already ruined the ketchup
> Look in the first cabinet
> Look in the second cabinet
> Go to the computer
> Access the internet
> Check out the browsing history
> Feel embarrassed by what you see in the browsing history
> Close that window and never think on it again
> Just dance
> Get back to work!
- Napoleon Bonarat
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>_Search for your purse of holding. You know there's something in there that can help you, if you could only find it, and then find it inside the purse.
>_Check all the desk drawers
>_appreciate the fine pen you found--a Pilot Namiki Falcon fountain pen, take it until you can place it in your purse of holding
>_if there's a pen, surely there's a letter opener. IF there is one, you might find a use for it later
>_Check all the desk drawers
>_appreciate the fine pen you found--a Pilot Namiki Falcon fountain pen, take it until you can place it in your purse of holding
>_if there's a pen, surely there's a letter opener. IF there is one, you might find a use for it later
Napoleon Bonarat
PiRATes From Heck | Champions of Mythos | Badside Brawlers | CrushBob
PiRATes From Heck | Champions of Mythos | Badside Brawlers | CrushBob
- Ellie Luisante
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- Candy Hart
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> PANIC!
> Turn right!
> No your other right!
> WATCH OUT!
> Duck for cover!
> Be very, very quiet!
> RUN!
> RUN FASTER!
> LEFT!
> Up. Up. Down. Down. Left. Right. Left. Right. B. A.
> Take a potty break.
> Don't forget to wash your hands!
> Tie your shoes.
> Check yourself in the mirror.
> Is that a zit?
> This isn't the time for a beauty pageant! Find the way down.
> Check the map.
> Go into the Torture Chamber.
> Don't go into the Torture Chamber.
> Turn right!
> No your other right!
> WATCH OUT!
> Duck for cover!
> Be very, very quiet!
> RUN!
> RUN FASTER!
> LEFT!
> Up. Up. Down. Down. Left. Right. Left. Right. B. A.
> Take a potty break.
> Don't forget to wash your hands!
> Tie your shoes.
> Check yourself in the mirror.
> Is that a zit?
> This isn't the time for a beauty pageant! Find the way down.
> Check the map.
> Go into the Torture Chamber.
> Don't go into the Torture Chamber.
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